Here's my Orc concept drawing~ Take a look and any critique is welcome!

Thanks!

It looks OK Mansen, the lower half does not look to be in scale with the top half. The back ground is very nice.

A few things on new creatures to Red Ash. This game system was meant to be expanded with new races and creatures. At this time I have not planned on any more races until after I get a number of things finished first. But if you are intent on using this art for a creature of you own design or willing to wait until I start adding new races, this race image may sit in the forum for a while.

I do not say this to discourage you, but so you are aware of the status of new races. Of course you can design the race too I won't hold it against you.

Thank you very much for your critique Chris. I will see what I can do to improve my orc character. I will also start working on the faerie ranger when I get the chance. Thanks for all the advice!

Mansen Lin

I hope to add a Orc in the future, I just have so much on my plate right now, i will not have time.